Update; Please read this :-)

Hey guys, you may of realised I deleted my last post. I did this because I realised that it wasn't up to my usual standards. It was also going to send the story in a different direction than I had originally planned, so that was my fault. I think I know exactly where I want to go with the story, but do you guys have any ideas of your own?

I've been really blocked recently, not really sure why :-( I'm going away for the weekend with my family to visit the newest edition to our family, my cousin's just become a dad :-) On Sunday night when I get back I'll sit down and have an update ready for Monday, sound good?

Are there any additional comments on the story ?

Also thank you so much for reading my story, it's something I really enjoy doing and people reading it and providing feedback just makes it even more worthwhile :-D THANK YOU !

Chapter 20: Bliss

Thanks for the comments :-) I know the last post may of confused you but tbh I really just wanted to bring Taylor back into it, sorry :-( I really wanted to update so this chapter doesn't really explain the whole Taylor thing but I promise the next one will, I'm just a little evil, haha :-P I've been a little busy this weekend :-( Sorry it's so short, I've have been really busy. I don't know why it squishes up my writing :-(

Jen's POV

I awoke to the sound of Jordan's steady breathing. It was peaceful and I decided I would just lay in the position I had been in all night, with my head on his chest and his arm drapped around my shoulder. I listened to his heart beating, his chest rising in and out, I figured I could get used to just laying like this every morning. I was looking out the large window and saw the sky reach it's lightest point. It must of only been around 5am. I didn't care. I felt my eyelids getting heavy and once again allowed sleep to overcome my body and mind.

I could sense his eyes on me and I felt him stroke my hair, this was another thing I could also get very used too. I gently open my eyes and saw the sun blazing through the window, how I hadn't woken up before now I'll never know. I moved my head to look him square in the eyes, I saw him smile at me and felt myself grinning back at him.

Jordan's POV

I couldn't sleep any longer. The sun was shining as bright as I have seen it in a long time, I feel the heat on my face and normally I would get up and close the curtains but I decided I didn't want to risk waking her up. She was so calm and to be quite honest I was enjoying just having her cuddled into me. I looked at her intently, dragging my eyes over every contour of her beautiful face. The way her eyelids fluttered when I ran my hand down her spine, how her lips pursed gently together as she slept and I couldn't help but think I never wanted this to ever end. If only things were as simple as that. I scanned over the events of the night before in my mind, I could feel my blood boiling as I thought about him hitting her, even the image of him laying a single finger on her made me want to kill him. She opened her eyes and I could see the sparkle in them, surely nobody would ever want to destroy that?

''What?''She said smiling at me in a way I've never seen before.

''Nothing, Do you think your dad will go mad when he finds out about us?''The thought popping into my head suddenly.

Jen's POV

When he asked about what my dad would think about us, I wasn't really sure what to say because I hadn't really thought about until now. I guess I didn't think we'd need to worry about it. I was sure however that telling him just when he was ill probably wasn't the best idea.

''I don't think we should tell him just yet, I don't want to stress him out. And Jordan, thank you,'' I said quietly. I was thankful. Last night when I threw myselt at him and he rejected me, I wasn't hurt but infact I felt like he respected me, isn't that how your supposed to feel?

New Story :-)

Okay, so I've posted the first chapter of my new story :-) I should get chapter 2 up tomorow morning. I'm really excited about it, to be honest the idea came to me when I was eating dinner lol. I had all these different scenarios in my head and then suddenly something popped into my head and i'm like ''Wow! I love this idea.''. So I decided to act on it and the first chapter is just an insight but any comments are very helpful :-)

http://theperfectmatch678.blogspot.com/

^^ Thats it :-) !

Chapter 19: A New Point Of View

Taylor's POV

I walk carefully down the stairs, placing a foot delicately on each one so as not to make a noise and wake anyone up. I had been laying silently on my bed for over two hours and had come to the conclusion that I wouldn't be getting any sleep tonight. I was waiting for her to come through the front door, Jen I mean. For the past few days she's been so distant and cold, it's so unlike her. Jen and I had been friends for years but we never quite got to the stage of being best friends up until a few months ago. I'd heard she'd been burgled and the guy had attacked her but it still gave me no reason as to why her and that little slut, Francesca had stopped talking. Jen always told me that they'd 'grown apart' or that they'd 'changed'. Something that mistified me more was why her and Carter had broken up. They always seemed like the perfect couple, always walking hand in hand, kissing and cuddling. Jen had always been a flirt, I noticed from afar that she was always with a different guy, all of them handsome and extremely wealthy but then Carter came along and whisked her off her feet, treating her like a princess. They fitted like two pieces of a puzzle slotted together. I guess it wasn't perfect after all. I ran into Jen in Starbucks one unusually sunny February afternoon. We got talking and somehow we've been virtually like sisters ever since. After the 'incident' at school both our parents decided we should get away and Jen expressed her wish to see her father. I suppose you already know this part, she met the guy. I could tell straight away by the look in her eyes that she wanted him and what Jen wants, Jen gets.

I walked over to the kettle, checking the amount of water left in it and pushing down the small black button that turned it on. I waited and made my cup of coffee, I'd always hated tea and the aroma of coffee was something of an afrodisiac to me. That was another thing, Jen was always getting desirable looks from men and well, I was just the friend. I was pretty but next to Jen I was always coming second best. Although when we walked into practice that day I locked eyes with a guy and do you know something? I think he may have actually looked at me as more than just the friend of the beautiful girl. I hope I get to see him again. Ohh, stop dreaming, he was probably only being nice. I sat down at the table and starting thinking and then came the worry. I was worried about Jen, for the past few days I had just hung around the house with the kids, playing games and taking the dogs for walks, kind of like a proper family although I knew I didn't really belong. I had only heard Jen come in once and that was the night of the accident and then I heard shouting and the front door slamming. I wanted to make sure she was okay but I knew she'd come to me in time to talk about things. I can only hope its soon.

I can't get this boy out of my head, I only remember his eyes. And to be honest they were brown and plain but they just spoke to me . . . . . . .

Small note: I wanted to bring Taylor back into it, but I'm not sure how it will go. I'll see what happens :-) Again thanks for all the comments :-D

Sorry it keeps squishing all my paragraphs together :-.

Help Wanted :-) . . .

Just a few questions, I'd be grateful if you could answer them but no pressure if you don't lol :-) Just so I can work on my writing and improve it :-) Ok, so are you guys enjoying 'Fate Or Just Coincidence' ? Is there anything you maybe don't like or is there something that you guys love? Also who is still reading 'Fate Or Just Coincidence?

I've said before that I've started another story, but I cannot decide who the main male character is lol :-( I'd rather do it about one of the Pens but I would definately think about writing it about someone else, so is there anyone you'd really like me to make it about?

One last thing, one of my friend has just started writing her own story so have a look. She's just posted the first chapter and it's brilliant :-)

http://louiseamillers.blogspot.com/2009/07/tbcc.html

Chapter 18: I'll Talk. You Listen

When he said ''Lets do this the right way'', I automatically assumed he'd meant sex, but after whispering in my ear telling me how beautiful I was he stopped. He looked at me. Gathered me into him and sat down, pulling me onto his lap. I felt his heart racing. I burried my head deeper into his chest wanting to feel this secure for the rest of my life.





''Tell me what happened, everything. I need to know. If we're going to be together there can be no secrets. Not one.'' He said gently as he stroked my hair in a soothing rhythm, front to back.



It was simple. I talked, he listened. As I spoke I felt his grip on me tighten, his heart beating even faster as I continued. When something was troubling me, I turned to sex. When I was with Carter, he wouldn't question my motives. Using my stress as his ecstasy, he knew if something was wrong but never once did he stop to ask me, I came to the conclusion that he was using me. This was the first time I had ever really talked with anyone, and I felt release. A feeling I'd only ever gotten with sex before now. This was new and I was enjoying the feeling. I let my emotions flow out as words not actions.

''What do you want to do about it?'' There it was, the question I knew was coming but I hadn't had the chance to think about. I knew Carter deserved to be punished for what he did and I knew that if he hurt someone else, I'd be plagued with guilt. But on the other hand, I wasn't sure if I could handle a court case, everything being dragged out in public, our old relationship on show for the world to see.

''I need to think about it. It'll take me some time but eventually I'll make a decision. If I do decide to take him to court, promise you'll support me? It's alot to ask but -'' I was stopped mid sentence by Jordan's lips on mine. I knew he'd be there for me.

''Right now I want to kill him. No man should ever beat a woman. It's just wrong, very wrong. If you decide to go through with it, you'll always have me.'' He said in a deep calm voice. It was conforting, to know I had his support.

I moved my head to look him straight in the eyes. I wanted to sleep with him, not in the sexual sense but I wanted to go to sleep with his arms wrapped around me and wake up the next morning still with him next me. This was also something new, beforehand waking up with Chuck made me feel a little sad, probably because I thought this was what my life was going to like. But I knew with Jordan there was a world of endless possibilities.

I unraveled myself from his arms and undressed. Sliding onto the king size bed, I pulled back the maroon coloured bed sheets and climbed in beside Jordan who had cheekily gotten in before me, I immediately felt him pull me into him. I was safe. Although the question still bore into my mind. What was Carter's motive for coming here?




Just a small note: Sorry this chapters so short, this next few will be longer :). I love the comments from everyone, they really are inspiring. Keep them coming :). I'm still working on my new story, I haven't posted it yet because I'm not entirely happy with it yet, so I'll keep to posted on that :)

Thanks again for all the wonderful comments :D.